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April 13, 2005
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I will cry myself to sleep tonight
Because there’s no one here to hold me tight
To chase away my deepest fright

I cannot wait for these tears to flow
To fill me with my woe
Till I feel lowest of low

Because it will show me something real
Something I truly feel
Something truly real…

Because I’m tired of lying
I want to lie down and start crying
Because I’m tired of trying

I cannot wait to fall down into this darkness around me
It fills me with something I want to see
Something I admire greatly, and want to be

I want these tears to be a waterfall
Flow peacefully from my eyes, and then fall
Down they hurtle… Fall…. Fall…. Fall…

Each tear fills me with more peace
A feeling I will soon release
This lovely, soothing, caressing peace

I cried myself to sleep tonight
There’s no one here to hold me tight
With my pillow wet… I say: Good night
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:iconnikkishizu:
wow that's really good! i hope i ca n make a poem that long one day.
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:iconjoshrb2004:
It's not always about length :)
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:iconnikkishizu:
true,though i still hope to make a long one.
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:iconnikkishizu:
thanks, and good luck to you too.
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:iconapril123:
awwwwwwwwwww I love this so so so much!! it's beautiful awww it brings a tear to my eye! :hug:

its beautiful
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:iconjoshrb2004:
I'm glad you like it, show's I did something right. And thanks for the fav :hug:
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:iconkurenaiyashin:
Ah, that's very sad. Beautifully done. I especially like it towards the end...
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:iconjoshrb2004:
Thanks :-), I'm glad (I think..) you like it
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:iconliquid-knife:
This is really beautiful. Exactly how it feels sometimes :(
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